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It’s nice to see a fight scene in this chapter but I think it would have been better to have the spar with Agrippa, it would have shown the difference in the skill levels of the two characters and we could finally see what Agrippa could do seeing as though up to this point he’s been nothing but all talk.
I might be nit-picking here but the droids seem to show signs of pain when their struck, shouldn’t they of remained emotionless since robots don’t feel pain?
The robots are supposed to simulate actual people, that’s why they react to being struck. Also Danny M As far as Agrippa goes you’ll have to wait and see
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A wide shot or some more dramatic poses would have really added some kick to it but it’s still good; they kinda like standing around.
Hmm I see what you mean… but keep in mind this is like literally the 2nd or 3rd time I’ve drawn an action scene (aside for practice pages) so I am very much still learning. Hopefully you’ll see that change as the comic progresses, as this whole comic has been a learning experience for me.
-Holly
I would argue that sometimes in telling the story on the page like this with this many shots one would sometimes have to sacrifice dramatic poses to just get the message across. I think the art did the job required of it.
Talking is a free action, eh?
I’m a stickler for spelling and grammar, therefore I’m compelled to point out that when you, Jim, said “shouldn’t they of” you SHOULD have said “shouldn’t they HAVE”. Things like that really bother me. Try to have some respect for literacy.