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Nice!
Love the concept of still having control towers and traffic control operators. That’s very human. It shows advanced technology but fear of letting automated things do their things and potentially crash. Good narration that comes with it too, gratz, Miss Holly!
-Dusk
Excellent narration! I could literally hear this playing in my head like it was a movie!
I hope they can keep that resolve.
Nice cliffhanger ending to Chapter 1! This is really good Holly.