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Why do I get the suspicion that she’s gonna get shot and crash close by them?
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Like the direction it’s going so far =)
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Overexposure to fiction?
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Yeah probably…
Anyways, like LP said, I like it so far. Even if what I predicted were to become true, I’d be more than thrilled cuz:
a; I’d be a seer/prophet
b; the way I see is waaaaaay awesome!
But I’m pretty sure Holly has better things to shove down our drooling mouths down this pit, right Miss? ^^
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Hmm, I can’t really comment at this point without giving anything away. Guess you’ll just have to wait to find out :D.
-Holly
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First off, I love the comic. It is some of the best art I’ve seen on the web in a long time.
That being said, I have a bit of constructive criticism: I find the number and placement of bold, emphasized terms to be a bit off. I find it throws off the flow of the dialogue.
Try saying things that you’ve written out loud. Leave a gap before and after bolded words, and exagerate that word. If it seems to fit, keep it in. If it sounds unusually odd, as I found some of them do, keep it in.
Other than that, I don’t see anything that can readily be done to improve such a stellar work, Keep it up.
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