Comments on: Page 23

By: cico34

cico34 — Tue, 12 Jul 2011 07:25:40 +0000

In first panel, “what you have found?”

Shouldn’t it be “what have you found?” ?

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Scott M — Sun, 13 Feb 2011 03:42:58 +0000

On this page in particular, the general whose name escapes me looks like Tom Selleck.

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Blake — Fri, 07 Jan 2011 14:59:48 +0000

Great prologue! I think the story flows nicely, and the characters are introduced quite well. And the art is fantastic of course!

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admin — Sat, 11 Sep 2010 21:33:28 +0000

Oops, thanks I’ll get that fixed soon.

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Gillsing — Sat, 11 Sep 2010 13:24:13 +0000

I concur!

But I would also like to point out that “personell” in the first panel should most likely be “personnel”.

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sinesofinsanity — Sat, 11 Sep 2010 01:00:01 +0000

Fantastic prologue!! Nice one

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