Fantastic prologue!! Nice one
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I concur!
But I would also like to point out that “personell” in the first panel should most likely be “personnel”.
Oops, thanks I’ll get that fixed soon.
Great prologue! I think the story flows nicely, and the characters are introduced quite well. And the art is fantastic of course!
On this page in particular, the general whose name escapes me looks like Tom Selleck.
In first panel, “what you have found?”
Shouldn’t it be “what have you found?” ?
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Fantastic prologue!! Nice one
I concur!
But I would also like to point out that “personell” in the first panel should most likely be “personnel”.
Oops, thanks
I’ll get that fixed soon.
Great prologue! I think the story flows nicely, and the characters are introduced quite well. And the art is fantastic of course!
On this page in particular, the general whose name escapes me looks like Tom Selleck.
In first panel, “what you have found?”
Shouldn’t it be “what have you found?” ?